25. Deeper into the first draft

6 May 2025

Alison Rocket Ross

Alright, we’ve let Aaron sit for a minute. Time to get back at. What kind of shenanigans will arise? Will we follow our outline or go totally rogue??

Let’s Find out.

So first of all let’s just… get rid of all that.

I actually decided to keep the Neighbor’s Lawn outline in there just in case. But we’re totally scratching the bar scene.

Ok, that’s where we’re going to leave this scene.

It’s been eating me up. I wasn’t quite sure how to make it work. But here, you can see Aaron is awkward and there’s some question with Brooke. But there relationship is solid. It isn’t an all or nothing situation and Aaron accomplished his goal by showing his intent.

This scene will undoubtedly cause tension as we continue with our story. Aaron already found the skull, his marriage proposal was rejected… and now we get to go deeper and let shit hit the fan.

Next time, we should sit back and reasses the outline for our act two. We have a few new factors to consider. That’s how these things go, it’s never a straight line. But we’ll get there.

-Rocket